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Haiku!

Post by andixcore on 2/14/2008, 3:19 pm

I am recently obsessed with haikus. I love them. They are easy and fun.

I wrote a four part Haiku...

All white and fluffy-
But its not cotton candy.
It tastes like water.

Its icy and cold.
Yesterday it made me slip.
I fell. Stupid Snow.

My poor knee hurts now.
I wish the sun would come out-
And make it vanish.

The sun reflects it-
Ow! Brightness burns my eyeballs.
Can't wait till it melts.


Go ahead! Give it a try!

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Re: Haiku!

Post by andixcore on 2/19/2008, 12:00 pm

TACO TIME

tacos are yummy
they have melty gooey cheese
bite down- they go 'crunch'


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Post by Jai[[SOS]] on 3/10/2008, 1:44 pm

I'm listening to
steven straight, his voice is great
this is livin, woah!


heehee
i am no good at hikus lol

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Post by andixcore on 3/10/2008, 2:32 pm

ha-ha-ha-ha-ha
that is the bestest ever
i lo-o-ove it

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Re: Haiku!

Post by FREAK#1 on 3/26/2008, 11:57 am

You are very odd
I cant believe you're my sis.
Try getting a life.

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Post by andixcore on 3/26/2008, 12:12 pm

I would get a life...
But, as it is, I'm home-schooled...
Unrealistic.

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Post by FREAK#1 on 3/27/2008, 11:26 am

Kinda sucks for you
Glad im not still in your shoes
I went to Martin!

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Post by andixcore on 3/27/2008, 2:39 pm

My nose is itching.
I think i have allergies-
to something. Oh joy.

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Post by FREAK#1 on 4/3/2008, 8:53 pm

I am on spring break.
yay yay yay yay yay yay yay!
YAY! YAY! YAY! YAY! YAY!

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Post by Jai[[SOS]] on 4/4/2008, 1:24 pm

have nothing to do
I wish spring break weren't so lame
wish i had a life.

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Post by andixcore on 4/4/2008, 10:10 pm

I'm watching youtube.
And eating mint choc-late chip
Oh yeah- I'm sick. Cough.

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Post by Jai[[SOS]] on 4/6/2008, 8:47 am

my sis broke her leg
poor girl, she fell off a swing
now she has a cast

Sad

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Post by FREAK#1 on 4/9/2008, 9:29 am

diddle doo diddle
come play my jumpy fiddle
i like it to rhyme

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Re: Haiku!

Post by Jai[[SOS]] on 4/13/2008, 8:26 am

that's cool for you, but
rhyming is over-rated
but to each their own

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Re: Haiku!

Post by andixcore on 4/14/2008, 12:33 pm

I need to do school...
Amanda, stop it with the
distractions! Goodness.

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